-- At: Nagisa Kaworu --

A really nice piece this pic is,the coloring and texture works pretty well(altough I have to say the rock texture could've use some works,since you can actually apply texture from photoshop to it...)

I have no complain regarding the coloring,and of course(as you may have guessed it) I have to criticize the pose and proportion,

yes,I have to say the pose looks rather weird in this picture,his right hand to start with,looks a bit too long,not to mention his palm(sometimes when you draw a hands its actually good to try to draw your own hands or maybe ask some friends to pose for you..)

and his left hand...well,where did it go..?its almost his left hand gone missing..XD,if the hand is leaning against the stone,some of his hands should've been visible,especially his palm...

well,I guess thats it for now,I hope this will be usefull for you and I believe you could improve much better..

Keep up the good work..<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />