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The hair flows nicely and the shadings are well executed in there, also on the body too. The anatomy is pretty flawless too and stands out in your gallery (maybe you should do more nudes?, they're looking good! 8D ). The only things I could critic are the size of the foot (it could be a bit smaller to match with her other sizes, but then again I like it when hands and feet are a bit oversized 'cause then they stand out) and the position of the character: she's now inclined to the left instead of standing straight, that could be fixed by moving her left leg and foot (the one in front of the picture) just a little bit more to the left. This is a very common mistake even with professionals because sometimes the artist is just so in the flow while drawing that it goes unnoticed is the character really straight or a bit unnaturally inclined. And I've done that about kazillion times too. Overall, I really like this image. Damn, I think I love it! : D It's so beautiful! <3
...someone saying that my anatomy looks good...? Am I dreaming? I always consisered my anatomy drawings horrible! mfdsufusdhua
I'll take acare about the size! Usually I worry a lot about the size of some body parts, if they are too small or too big, it's good when other people tell me, so I can have a reference, because sometimes I fail to detect it myself.
So I should put the foot that is in the front a bit more in the middle of her body? I tried to sutdy a bit of character balance, but it's indeed hard!
Thanks again!
No, you're very wake. : DD This is damn good, even amazing considering the earlier works, I was almost surprised to see this in my post because it was so flawless (no offence, dear, I know especially fingers have been hard for you over the years but you've gotten better) and still looked as if it had been easy to do. Drawing so much has really started to show its effects on you, that's for sure. Aah, yes, about the foot size: one good comparison in here is for example the size of the neck, which is tiny, plus the breasts, which are huge on her upper body but look rather small when compared to the foot. And yup, the whole leg and the foot could be a liiittle bit more to the left so she would be in balance. Urgh, it's sometimes so hard to notice such little things, especially in one's own work.
My pleasure!
oh! Also ive actually seen yaoi pornography
here... hmmm