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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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The concept is fantastic, and the characters expression looks adorably blank haha. I adore how to colored in the hair, and The background really pops out at me, fabulous work!
Some things I'd like to point out are;
~Anatomy~
-His thighs look a bit to stiff, an straight. Next time if you attempt this pose, try adding a tad more curve or something o3o.
- I don't quite understand his right arm, like his shoulders make the arm look as if its slightly behind the body, and yet his hand coms to the front. I think the bend of the elbows on the right arm needs more shading so it looks like the bottom half of the arm is coming towards the thigh instead of staight down. It mades it look as if the left arm is longer then the right.
~Background~
-Something that really pointed out to me was the cherry blossom and the leaves. I'm not too sure if you wanted to make it that way, and is the cherry blossom tree is suppose to be a shadow? It seems pretty confusing, cause the tree looks real with the details, but looks fake cause its transparent. Next time try making the tree look more solid transparent (for a tree shadow) or make the tree on your own with your own shading (to make it the tree itself).
~Other~
-Your lighting seems kind of strange. It's coming from the top left, and off of the cherry blossom tree? if so, I saw that you gave the pink ligh shading to the edges of his pants, and his sleaves. Shouldn't the right collar get the same effect? Like the part where the collar curves into the neck.
Overall, the picture is magnificent. I really like the Y perspective, and your background idea.
Keep up the good work! <3
~Melody
eu achei tão fofo !!
dei uma passadinha na galeria da moça pra ver o original.
bem ou mal, qnd agente faz um personagm de outra pessoa, mesmo q não seja a nossa intenção , sempre fica algo nosso na nossa imagem.
c sabe q eu acompanho o q vc faz há alguns anos ku e tenho pra mim q ao longo dese tempo, o seu traaço, estiloe pintura se desenvolveram muito mesmo o q dá muito gostod e ver pq torna os ses trabalhos únicos e completamente distintos dos de outros artistas.
achoq qnd houve essa mistura que citei, o personagem ficou mais leve e com um ar mais kawai... num sei bem ...
achoq os pontos q tentou forçar pro trabalho original da moça, ficaram um pouco de amis... achoq vc devia ter se soltado mais para afzer essa peça, principalmente a pintura q é um ponto tão bom seu!!
seiq se a imagem fosse sua totalmente, vc teria abusado mais de contrates e texturas e não sei dizer até q ponto a falta disso contribuiu ou não pra aproximar o tema do original... as funcionou bem no geral e achoq é mais uma peça diferente par sua gallery .
Kurama querida, adoro vc e td q vc faz!! morro de inveja e fiz questão de deixar essa crítica pra q td mundo saiba o quanto eu admiro e toh vendo o seu esforço tds esses ans e como isso se aplica nessa imagem como um todo.
oq vc faz hj é só um reflexo do caminho q vc percorreu até aqui e quanto mais horas-bunda vc ficar sentada desenvolvendo isso mais longe vc irá.
parabens moça ^^ belo trabalho
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