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Art trade with :iconskyzen:
I have chosen to draw the OC Asuka ([link]) ^^ And I wanted to draw the cute mascot too XD
Mixed some of her outfits, sorry XD And also sorry for showing a bit of her butt ;__;

I tried looking at real people photos to get some references for this one. Since I felt I needed to practice more.

His part of the art trade - [link]

Thanks a lot for the comments! ^_^

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:iconirethsingollo:
Sooo, first let me say I love the colours you've picked for this picture. They all go together very well and create a very nice atmosphere. I also love the patterns on her clothes, it's such a nice touch and adds a soft feeling to the whole pic.

Although the colours are well picked and add to each other, I think you should experiment with different hues a bit. Like shading the purple with dark blue and vice-versa. It would make the picture look more striking. Using purple and blue shades for her hair would be nice too. Just experiment when picking colours, sometimes the result won't do and sometimes it will surprise you how good it actually looks! Also I would add deeper shades on her skin, preferably purple or dark brown.

Her pose is good, I love the way you draw fingers, they look so elegant! And the pet is so cute too >w< Background is simple, yet nice and overall composition is great too.

Anyways, hope this was at least a bit useful for you, coming from someone like me ><
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:icontomoyo-hime:
Really cute i love the colours :D ~ :heart:

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:iconshunshuu-tsunami:
omgg really nice : o

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:iconadorangelle:
This one is really good!
I'm glad you used references to help. ^^
Practice is always helpful.
Love your use of brushes too.

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:iconneiths:
Cute and nice anatomy XD

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:iconyukiko-kun:
ELA FICOU TÃO LINDONA, JSAFDGSAYFUGSDU VOCÊ SABE QUE EU AMEI! :iconadorableplz: ELA É TODA UDA XD Peituda, bunduda! *APANHA*
Só queria apontar umas coisinhas ;_; O braço, eu notei agora, está curvo demais na parte de dentro... se fosse só no início e depois seguisse reto, mas ele curva pra fora depois.. Cuidado com isso.
ADOREI O BICHINHO, ALIÁS ;_; é tão difícil desenhá-los, mas você fez uma coisinha adorável, mashfjgyuds~ ROUPA PERFEITA TAMBÉM, SHFAKHDSUIGSD, TUDO!

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que coisa mais lindaaaaa!!!! :iconlove:

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:iconkurama-chan:
HAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUAHUA AWWWWWW *GRUDA*

Acho que braços são meus inimigos número 1, depois de pernas, AAAAAAH XD
Eu nem notei isso ;__;
Mas é o início do braço que não pode ficar curvo ou a continuação dele? ._.
Bichinhos são difíceis mesmo, obrigada! ;__;

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:iconkurama-chan:
Thanks XD

And lol, it's still far from nice

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:iconkurama-chan:
Yes, I agree they are good! ^^
Thank you so much for the comment!

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